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The response provides a basic overview of the trends but lacks detailed analysis and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more precise vocabulary would enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the description.
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Question
Describe the trends in the number of international visitors to four different Asian countries from 2005 to 2015.
Identify which country had the highest growth.
Discuss any significant fluctuations.
Highlight any periods of steady increase or decrease.
#Tourism
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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Line chart shows the number of
international
visitors from 2005 to 2015 to four different Asian countries.Firstly, we can see that the number of
international
visitors increased in all of the four countries. Highest
number of visitors has China
which is
15,000,000 in 2005. However, the lowest number of international
visitors has India
which is 5,000,000 in 2005. Japan is really a little bit higher
then
India and the number of visitors there is
6,000,000 in 2005, meanwhile Thailand is loosing to
Chine by only 3,000,000 visitors in 2005.In
2015
China reaches 21,000,000 visitors, which is the highest
number through al
, the Asian countries. Also
China has a
highest
growth through 10 years and India has a
lowest growth. India and Japan are rising really close to each other. And Thailand and China has
similar growth, however still China is taking a first place in a number of international
visitors.Overall, all the countries had a
grouth
through 10 years.