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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
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Task response2

Writing Task

#Retail and E-commerce
#Table
Describe the table data on annual online retail sales growth rates in various regions from 2016 to 2021.
Summarize the growth rates for each region over the given years.
Identify any regions with particularly high or low growth rates.
Discuss any clear trends or irregularities.
Region2016 (%)2017 (%)2018 (%)2019 (%)2020 (%)2021 (%)
North America101215182225
Europe81012152022
Asia-Pacific151820253035
Latin America568101215
Middle East & Africa34681012

Submitted Answer

Words179|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
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In this
data
were
we can see from year 2016 to 2021 shows annual online retail sales growth rates in different regions. Asia-Pacific is dominating every year from the start to end , and Middle East & Africa is on the lowest in retail sales.
North America Sales Increased year by year with
aprrox
3% only In 2016 it was grown by 2% but after 2016 it
uplift
by 3% from 15 % to 25%
till
2021 which shows good online sales.In 2016 Europe sales starts with 8 percent which is quite low in
comparision
with
other region
but
still
it manage to reached
till
22% by the end of 2021.
There is a big margin
diffrence
between Latin America and North America, 5%
diffrence
between this two region in 2016
and
it
get
increased year by year.But Middle East & African region are at the lowest in sales which is at 3% from the start of
businees
, still it
manage
to reach
till
12% by the year 2021.
Hence
online sales are Increasing In every region by
good
percentage.

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