IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a basic comparison of educational levels in Russia and China but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Education Levels
#Pie Chart
The pie charts show the educational levels of the population in Russia and China in 2023. Describe the data presented.
Summarize the main features of the educational levels in both countries.
Compare the proportion of people with secondary education in each country.
Identify any significant trends or differences.
China
Russia
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In
2023
the education in the Russia and China had been
dicussed
for experts about the difference in some aspects
, In fact
the habitants in both of the countries receives a great
educadion
when they are the primary and secondary education.
Around 70% of the habitants in Russia and China completed
these education degrees. But in secondary education most part of
the students in China doesn't
completed
the degree in comparison with Russia.The contrast is that even though the China had
a
lowest number of
studants
that
completed
the secondary school,
most part of
the
studants
completed
the Bachalor's Degree, different from Russia, that had him statistics low when we talk about Bachalor's Degree.