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The response contains several inaccuracies in data interpretation and omits key countries from the chart. While grammar is mostly correct, the coherence and cohesion are hindered by the inclusion of incorrect information. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety.

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Task response	4.0

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#Environmental Issues

#Bar Chart

The bar chart compares the recycling rates (in percentage) of household waste in five European countries in the years 2010, 2015, and 2020.

Describe the recycling rates in each country across the years.

Identify any notable increases or decreases.

Compare the overall trends among the countries.

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Germany consistently had the highest recycling rates across all three years. It started at around 60% in 2010, increased to about 70% by 2015, and reached approximately 75% in 2020, showing a steady and significant upward trend.

Belgium also showed relatively high recycling rates, starting close to 50% in 2010 and climbing gradually to just over 60% by 2020. Though not as dramatic as Germany’s, Belgium's progress was consistent.

The UK followed a similar pattern, with rates increasing from about 40% in 2010 to nearly 55% in 2020. The growth was moderate but stable over the decade.

Italy saw a notable improvement. Beginning at around 35% in 2010, it rose to roughly 45% in 2015 and nearly 55% by 2020, indicating a strong upward trend, especially between 2015 and 2020.

France, however, had the lowest recycling rates throughout the period. It began at just under 30% in 2010 and increased only slightly to around 35% by 2020. The change was minimal compared to the other countries.

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