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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 6 (Academic Training)

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06 Apr 25, 04:50
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and specific data points. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate, but there are some inaccuracies and limited variety in sentence structures.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Housing
#Line Chart
The line chart illustrates the number of new housing units built annually in four Australian cities from 2010 to 2015.
Summarize the annual trends in the number of new housing units for each city.
Identify any significant increases or decreases.
Compare the housing development trends among the four cities.

Submitted Answer

Words102|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
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From the line graph we can see the amount of the unit of house that developed in Australia
anually
, especially in four
city
such as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Perth, from 2010 to 2015.
Overall, Sydney started and ended with the most housing units, and the second city with the most housing units being developed was Melbourne, the third was Brisbane, and Perth was the last.
Sydney, Melbourne, and Brisbane increased continuously every year, unlike the others, in the first three years Perth made a consistent increase in developing houses. After that, Perth had experienced a gradual decrease from 2012 to 2015.

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