IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5.5

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5.5
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19 Jan 25, 06:51
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and specific comparisons. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate, but there are some inaccuracies and limited variety in sentence structures.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors15
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Agriculture
#Table
The table below displays the percentage of land used for organic farming in four different regions over six years (2017-2022). Describe the data and make comparisons where relevant.
Summarize the trends in the percentage of land used for organic farming in each region.
Identify any regions that show significant increases or decreases over the years.
Compare the trends between the different regions.
YearEuropeNorth AmericaAsiaSouth America
201712856
201814967
2019151178
2020181299
202120131011
202222151213

Submitted Answer

Words115|Paragraphs1
English:US English
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Every region shows an increase in land used for
organic
farming over the year. Europe shows
highest
increase in
percentage
of
organic
farming land over the year. In 2017, Europe has the highest percentage of
organic
farming land and Asia has the least percentage of
organic
farming land. It continues to 2022. Europe keeping a steady highest percentage
organic
farming land compared to other regions from 2017 to 2022. The second largest is North America, continued by South America. Asia has the least
organic
farming land. This probably happened because Europe has a better awareness considering the benefits of
organic
stuffs
. While North America, South America, and Asia still struggling to
enhace
their food security.

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