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The response provides a basic overview of the water usage trends but lacks detailed analysis and clarity. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary reduce the overall effectiveness of the essay.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Interpret the water usage trends in four South American countries from 2000 to 2020 based on the provided Line Chart.
Describe the overall water usage trends in each country.
Identify any periods of significant change in water usage.
Compare and contrast the water usage trends among the countries.
#Water Usage
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:2
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Based on the picture above, it is a line chart showing
an information
about the water usage trends in four South American countries from 2000 to 2020. There are four countries that are included in this line chart, Brazil, Argentina, Chile, and Peru. This essay will give a brief explanation based on the line chart.From year 2000, all countries lines charts showing that the water usage is increasing, showing people in South American gain the amount of water usage from years to years. However, comparing to Brazil, Argentina, and Chile, Peru has the lowest amount of water usage in the line chart which is 80
amount
of water usage. Brazil has the biggest amount
of water usage and
it increased to 240 amount of water usage in 2020. Another differences from the datam
Peru and Chile is different by 20 amount of water usage, same as Chile with Argentina and Argentina with Brazil.