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The response provides a basic comparison of energy consumption in four countries but lacks clarity and precision. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary reduce the overall effectiveness of the analysis.
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Writing Task
#Energy Consumption
#Bar Chart
Study the Bar Chart that compares renewable and non-renewable energy consumption in four Asian countries in 2021.
Outline the primary differences in energy consumption between renewable and non-renewable sources.
Compare the energy consumption patterns among the countries.
Mention any unique or noteworthy trends.
Submitted Answer
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Above bar chart
show
the comparison of renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption in different countries around the world in 2021.With china and
south korea
, both falls in different categories. China has more renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption than south korea
. China's renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy has more compared to other countries. South korea
has less renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption.India has 150
renewable
energy consumption and 450 non
-
renewable
energy consumption. Whereas in japan
it has 100 renewable
energy consumption and 300 non
-
renewable
energy consumption.As we look into this, china has improved
it's
renewable
and
non
-
renewable
energy consumption compared to others but
china has it's
own comparison of renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption. Whereas
japan
has a balanced between usage of renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption. South korea
has less renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption. As compared to all of the countries china
is using highest
renewable
enery
consumption.