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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and clear structure. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity and coherence, while the task achievement is hindered by insufficient coverage of trends and comparisons.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Cultural Participation
#Table
The table below shows the percentage of people attending live performances in various South American countries from 2016 to 2021.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
| Country | 2016 | 2017 | 2018 | 2019 | 2020 | 2021 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Brazil | 35 | 37 | 36 | 38 | 40 | 42 |
| Argentina | 30 | 32 | 31 | 33 | 35 | 37 |
| Chile | 25 | 26 | 27 | 28 | 29 | 30 |
| Peru | 20 | 22 | 21 | 23 | 25 | 27 |
| Colombia | 28 | 29 | 28 | 30 | 32 | 34 |
Submitted Answer
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A percentage of people that attended live performances in different
south american
countries from 2016 to 2021 were recorded and from the table we can
see
that in the year 2016 , Brazil had the highest attendance rate , and coming in second was Argentina which was 5% less than Brazil.We can also
see
that Colombia , Peru and Chile had similar attendances with the
differnce
not so much
The data for 2021,
shows
that Brazil still tops the table with the highest number of attendances as seen
in the years 2017, 2018,2019,2020, and Argentina also has the second highest
number of attendees in the past year.In 2019
-
2021 , Colombia showed
a steady rise in attendance as compared to what was seen
in 2016 -
2018 , Chile also showed
a slight increase in attendance but
it was still low when comapred
to Colombia. From 2016 - 2021
Peru hasnt
shown
any significant rise in attendance in those past years